Clustering Homework for VA302

2 Mar

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One Response to “Clustering Homework for VA302”

  1. deniz cem önduygu March 3, 2010 at 19:17 #

    ezgi, I’ve written the same thing to many of your classmates: the grid isn’t there as a beautiful texture, it’s a skeleton to anchor your elements on. use it. very few of your elements are properly aligned to the grid, there’s ambiguity everywhere.

    the other problem is that you stack everything in the center of the page, and this creates a boring symmetry along the spread (the two-page layout). try to see the spread as a whole, and not just two distinct pages.

    solve these two problems and you’re set.

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